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Cold Email Template

Cold email is won or lost in the first two lines. This template keeps you under 90 words, leads with a reason you're reaching out to *them specifically*, and asks for one small yes — the format that consistently beats long, feature-heavy pitches.

Last reviewed 2026-07-01

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Subject line

quick question about {{company}}'s onboarding

Preview text

Saw your new self-serve flow — one idea.

Opener (personalized)

Hi {{first_name}} — I noticed {{company}} just launched self-serve signup. Nice move.

Reason / relevance

We help {{industry}} teams cut trial-to-paid drop-off. For companies your size that's usually worth 10–15% more conversions.

One clear ask

Worth a 15-minute call next week to see if it applies to you?

Sign-off

Either way, congrats on the launch. {{your_name}} · {{your_company}}

Footer

{{your_company}}, {{address}} · Reply STOP to opt out.

How to fill in each field

Subject line

Lowercase, specific and curiosity-driven. Reference their company, not your product.

Common mistake: Salesy subjects like 'Boost your revenue 300%!' land in spam or get deleted on sight.

Personalized opener

One line proving you did 30 seconds of research. Reference a launch, hire or post.

Common mistake: 'I hope this email finds you well' — a signal you're mass-blasting.

Reason / relevance

Tie your value to their situation with a concrete number if you have one.

Common mistake: Listing every feature instead of the one outcome they care about.

One clear ask

Ask for a single small commitment (a reply or 15 minutes), not 'a demo'.

Common mistake: Multiple asks or a huge one ('hop on a 60-min call') kill reply rates.

Opt-out

Include a company name, address and easy opt-out to stay compliant even for cold B2B.

Common mistake: No opt-out or physical address — a compliance and deliverability risk.

Related templates & variants

Cold outreach is the acquisition variant. For nurturing people who just signed up, use the welcome email template. See the pillar page for the full anatomy of a marketing email.

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Frequently asked questions

How long should a cold email be?+

Under 90 words. Long cold emails rarely get read; a tight message with one ask converts far better.

Is cold email legal?+

In the US, CAN-SPAM permits cold B2B email if you identify yourself, include a physical address and honor opt-outs. In the EU/UK, rules are stricter — check local guidance before sending.

How many follow-ups should I send?+

Two to three spaced follow-ups typically capture most replies. Add value each time rather than just 'bumping' the thread.

Sources & further reading

We review authoritative guidance when building each template. Links are for reference only.